专家教诲:四六级作文决胜在于发明闪光点
战鼓已经敲响了，列位妥协在抗击CET最前线的点点英语的冤家们，你们辛苦啦，希看下面的内容可以帮上巨匠！
四六级测验越来越使模板无用武之地，阅卷西席在阅卷的历程中最多的是关注同学们的用词和句型的利用。
高分作文标记
1：四级120-150字；六级150—180字；
2、能否长短句交织；
3、用词能否得当，准确，笼统，只管即便利用可以吸引阅卷西席眼球的闪光词；
4、关键词能否换用，切勿老用频频词；
下面给出写好一篇作文的留意事变：
1.得当用主动替代主动，如许能更客不雅观的反应毕竟,句子开头不要老是用we / I (好比写末端时不用we should pay attention to而用Attention should be paid to. )举个经典末端2004年六月六级作文的末了一段：It is ,therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that. Thus， its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively.2.善于利用插进语，好比说把副词、连接词等，作插进语放在中心，通俗放在主语、动词大概助动词后，双方分别加上逗号。
如however / therefore /for example/I believe做插进语放在中心，通俗放在动词，助动词后，双方分别加上逗号。
好比说： Other individuals, however, take the attitude that…
3.一定要学会换词，换笼统，详细的替代太遍及的。(测验中通俗不要出现good, bad , many, thing, think,
people, opinion等等)好比下面例子中，applicable替代proper, approaches替代ways, implement替代carry out, sharpen one’s competitive edge替代enhance one’s competitiveness(提高某物竞争力)
下面举一篇一位同学写的精良作文(14分)的例子，看看他是若何运用各种写作本领的。这位同学把西席上课讲的各种写作伎俩和出色更换和句型都用上了，作文有了很年夜的提高。
Computer and I By Simmy
I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that i indulged myself in googling an army of useful information i had expected ,and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music. That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world belonged to me.
exceedingly更换 very
thrilling更换 exciting
sth. exert a tremendous fascination on sb更换 sb. be interested in sth.
google更换 search
an army of更换 a lot of
The dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of computers. Coincident with the advancement of science and technology, computers pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing to growing individuals. It is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged by them, in large measure!
The dawn of the new century witnessed是一个出色句型，用来描绘在某个期间发作了什么事变；
Increasing popularity更换 more and more popular
Coincident with…极度地道的词汇，表达“与…同等”的意思，更换 With…
Advancement更换 development
Pour into ( flood into / swarm into )更换 enter into
Current ( currently )更换 now
Appeal to sb.更换 sb. be interested in sth.
Growing individuals更换 more and more people
It is no exaggeration to say经典句型，说某事是尽不夸张的
For a start, we can, freely, search desired information at any moment . Little by little, our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. Additionally, we can get huge recreations online by chatting, playing games, or delivering email.
For a start更换 To begin with
We can, freely, search用了插进语的写作伎俩
our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened.用了极度出色的主动
Additionally更换 In addition / Besides
Deliver更换 send
There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, in a way, especially the growing violence ,***, porn pictures, AV-films emerging on the screen , which leads quiet a few net citizens to copying.
There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings,这个句子有三个出色之处，首先There is no denying that这个句型，另有however作为插进语， function in the disservice of更换 do harm to
Emerging替代 appearing ( fading替代 disappearing )
Net citizen网夷易近，属于出色用词
As a classic proverb goes that no garden has no weeds. Computers do play a positive role in the development of people' lives, despite a slice of unfavorable impacts. We should ,therefore, take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet.
No garden has no weeds更换 Every coin has two sides
Computers do play，do夸张
Positive更换 important / good等
A slice of更换 a part of
Unfavorable更换 bad
Impacts更换 effects / influences
We should, therefore, take advantage of…利用插进语
Fruits (并且fruits用的极度笼统， merits/ virtues)更换 advantage ( defects更换 disadvantage )
Facet更换 aspect
列位同学，下面的作文里有这么多出色的闪光点，作文如何会不得高分呢！
以下是30个最经典的更换词，列位同学可以参考一下。
1.individuals,characters, folks替代(people ,persons)
2: positive, favorable, rosy(美好的)，promising
(有希看的)，perfect, pleasurable , excellent, outstanding替代good
3:dreadful, unfavorable, poor, adverse(无害的)替代bad
如果bad做表语，可以有be less impressive替代
eg.An army of college students indulge themselves in playing games, enjoying romance with girls/boys or killing time passively in their dorms. When it approaches to graduation ,as a result, they find their academic records are less impressive.
4.(an army of, an ocean of, a sea of, a multitude of ,many,if not most)替代many.
注：用many, if not most一定要鉴戒，many后一定要有词。
Eg. Many individuals, if not most, harbor the idea that….同理用most, if not all ,替代most.
5: a slice of, quiet a few , several替代some
6:harbor the idea that, take the attitude that,
hold the view that, it is widely shared that,
it is universally acknowledged that)替think
(因为是白话，所以要加that)
7:affair ,business ,matter替代thing
8: shared代 common
9.reap huge fruits替代get much benefit )
10:for my part ,from my own perspective替代 in my opinion
11:Increasing(ly),growing替代more and more(留意没有growingly这种形式。所以当润色名词时用increasing/growing.润色描述词，副词用increasingly.
Eg.sth has gained growing popularity.
Sth is increasingly popular with the advancement of sth.
12.little if anything,或little or nothing替代hardly
13..benefitial rewarding替代helpful be beneficial of
14.shopper,client,consumer,purchaser,替代customer
15.exceedingly,extremely替代very
16.hardly unnecessary, hardly inevitable ...替代 necessary,
inevitable
17.sth appeals to sb, sth exerts a tremendous fascination on sb替代sb take interest in
18.capture one's attention替代attract one's attention.
19.facet,demension,sphere代aspect
20.be indicative of ,be suggesteive of ,be fearful of代 indicate, suggest ,fear
21.give rise to, lead to, result in, trigger替代cause.
22. There are several reasons behind sth替代..reasons for sth
23.desire替代want.
24.pour attention into替代pay attention to
25.bear in mind that替代remember
26. enjoy, possess替代have(留意process是历程的意思)
27. interaction替代communication
28.frown on sth替代 be against , disagree with sth
29.to name only a few, as an example替代 for example
30. next to/virtually impossible,替代nearly impossible
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