OG10语法268题及GWD22语法总结二十四
23. A Labor Department study states that the numbers of women employed outside the home grew by more than a thirty-five percent increase in the past decade and accounted for more than sixty-two percent of the total growth in the civilian work force.
A. numbers of women employed outside the home grew by more than a thirty-five percent increase
B. numbers of women employed outside the home grew more than thirty-five percent
C. numbers of women employed outside the home were raised by more than thirty-five percent
D. number of women employed outside the home increased by more than thirty-five percent
E. number of women employed outside the home was raised by more than a thirty-five percent increase
1.简练：（一级拂拭 A,E）grew/raise和 increase频频
the phrase grew by more than a thirty-five percent increase is redundant and wordy,
was raised by ... increase is redun­dant.
2.词法：(二级拂拭 A,B,C )
默示统计数据用双数 the number , the number of……
1.主动语态 (二级拂拭 C,E )
主动语态要有合理的发起
because there is no identifiable agent responsible for the raising of the number of women employed.用主动要有举措的逻辑发起
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