OG10语法268题及GWD22语法总结二十八
27. Published in Harlem, the owner and editor of the Messenger were two young journalists. Chandler Owen j and A. Philip Randolph, who would later make his reputation as a labor leader.
A. Published in Harlem, the owner and editor of the Messenger were two young journalists. Chandler Owen and A. Philip Randolph, who would later make his reputation as a labor leader.
B. Published in Harlem, two young journalists, Chandler Owen and A. Philip Randolph, who would later make his reputation as a labor leader, were the owner and editor of the Messenger.
C. Published in Harlem, the Messenger was owned and edited by two young journalists, A. Philip Randolph, who would later make his reputation as a labor leader, and Chandler Owen.
D. The Messenger was owned and edited by two young journalists, Chandler Owen and A. Philip Randolph, who would later make his reputation as a labor leader, and published in Harlem.
E. The owner and editor being two young journalists, Chandler Owen and A. Philip Randolph, who would later make his reputation as a labor leader, the Messenger was published in Harlem.
1.润色：主语（一级拂拭 A, B）
A.前置定语的中央词指向句子的主语。
2.逻辑意思明白（二级拂拭D, E）
并列构造的非限制性定语从句的润色。
A and B , who/which….从句润色 A and B；Ａ，who/which…. . and B．从句只润色 A
在c里 makes it clear that the clause beginning who refers to Randolph. A, B, D, E外面的who would later make his reputation润色有题目,形式上润色复合短语, Chandler Owen and A. Philip Randolph,可是两团体于his又不对应
3．润色的有效性
润色构造离润色语太远不合理
the phrase and published in Harlem is too remote from the Messenger to modify it effectively (留意，也算是一种润色错误).
4.简练：（二级拂拭E）
A being B , being不简练。
5..并列构造：留意逻辑意思上的平行。The owner and editor, the Messenger是同位语，可是理想意思有题目，拂拭E
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